Letter 2-New things mention

Dear Tim:

     Summer is about to end, but it's still hot in here. I wonder when will it end, however, I'm sure that I will miss summer a lot when the freezing winter comes.

     Here's the news, we're having a voice over competition again! I'm in the same team with Melody, Angela, Otto and Jay, we choose "Shrek 2" for our clip to use. I hope it ends out great because I think the part we choose was pretty interesting, but also hard to keep up the speed in the clip. Also, Doris's drawing are amazing, there are still someone who's talented in our class,and their works are really shocking.

     By the way,I'll started to reply your comments under the response, just letting you know. About your last comment I'll probably reply it on Saturday night.(cause our PTA is helding in this Saturday morning,I'm going to help,and I have class in the afternoon) And my favorite K-Pop group it's about to release a new album in these days, maybe I'll mention them in my next response. Are there any celebrities you're crazy with?

                                                                                                                      Best regards 

                                                                                                                                    Vivian   

Letter 1-Changes

Dear Tim :
     It's been a long time for me to post something on my blog ,it feels nice to start writing response to you again!
     The news that you had a surgery really touches me a lot ,my grandma also had a surgery for her knees in May.She suffered a lot, which made me felt really bad,the first time that her legs got problems was because taking care of me, she slipped down from the stairs.(when I was still a baby, I always cried with babysitter taking care of me, that's the reason why we did't hire a babysitter)  I hope your body already feel full of energy ;)
     Also,you've might already know that there are some new faces in our classroom, freshman for the EHP family! I'm really excited for the chemical reaction between you guys
                                                                                                         Best regards
                                                                                                                            Vivian